Flash Fiction by Linda Mooney
My words were:
incorrigible, sparked, epiphany, Zamboni, stymied, and Petrichor
“I miss making love to you.”
Neecha stared at her husband’s back as he
prepared to leave. He paused momentarily, deciding whether to turn around and
face her, or to continue out the door to where his horse and his elven army
awaited. She held her breath and prayed. Prayed he would respond. Prayed he
wouldn’t go, although she knew he must. Prayed he would turn around and look at
her.
She heard him sigh. His shoulders slumped;
his head bowed slightly. Another moment’s indecision, and he continued down the
short walkway.
Her heart broke. Shoving a fist into her
mouth to stifle her sob, she could only watch through her rising tears as he
made his way toward the gate. She knew she should go after him, but she couldn’t make
her body obey, and her mind rebelled. For the past three months it had been his
pride versus her pride. His irrational, incorrigible sense of duty versus her need to
keep him safe. As a result, their sex life had suffered. That, and their love.
They were at an impasse. She felt stymied,
unable to come up with another excuse, another reason that would prevent him
from leaving her this final time.
No. Nothing will
stop him from attacking the huge beast and defending his home and his people.
An idea sparked. Although nothing would
prevent him from going to defend his people, maybe if she delayed his
departure. A few minutes, another hour could mean the difference between dying
in battle, and surviving.
A cool wind blew over them. Neecha took a
deep breath, filling her lungs with the rich petrichor of the rain-washed
earth. Spring was turning her face to the sun. Soon, this past winter would be
a memory.
Standing in the doorway, she slowly
unbuttoned the front of her gown. Lowering her arms, she let the sleeves slip
off her shoulders. The rich silk puddled around her ankles.
“Orlen.”
He paused at the gate and turned around
for one last look at her. She saw his eyes widened at the sight of her slightly
rounded belly. She hadn’t told him about the child she carried. Not yet. She had
started to many times, but this damned impasse between them had kept her
silent.
She couldn’t keep it from him any longer.
Not when this could be the last time she’d see him.
“If you are brought back to me on your
shield, know that I will tell your son that you died valiantly. That you died a
hero.”
He started at the revelation, and his
expression changed. She knew he’d had an epiphany. With the gods' blessings, he’d
no longer charge indiscriminately against the enemy. He’d take greater care.
Perhaps even direct his warriors from a safer distance, although she doubted
it. Regardless, she knew she’d struck a chord deep within him. How long had
they’d been praying for a child and heir?
He rushed toward her, sweeping her up into
his arms as he carried her back into their home, straight to the bedroom.
Neecha laughed until his mouth came down over hers, covering her lips with his.
Smothering her with his love.
The army would have to wait. The enemy
would wait, whatever type of creature a Zamboni was.
At that moment, she and Orlen had to
celebrate this miracle of creation. Then, they would celebrate the love that
created him.
Sighing happily, she surrendered to his
passion.
Loved the use of the word Zamboni!
ReplyDeleteMe too - kudos! I really wondered how anyone would use it and I admire the fact that you didn't elect to drop that one (which the rules would have allowed).
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