Monday, December 10, 2012

Here Be News

Posted by: Unknown
Our new releases this week

Four hundred years ago, Nik was tricked by his lover and left stranded as a powerless, but immortal, human. Now he craves only one thing: to reclaim the book that was once his tail and become a water Elemental again. Unfortunately, he can only locate the book when someone touches the pages. This time he won't be left high and dry.

Isla is left a beautiful leather-bound book in her great-aunt's will, perfect for using during her life drawing classes. However, she can't bring herself to mark the translucent pages until a compelling crimson-haired stranger strips for art.

Nik is torn. Years of enforced humanity have given him a conscience. Despite his best efforts at remaining a heartless water Elemental, he is failing. He is falling for Isla, who has no idea she holds the power of the oceans, and his heart, in her hands.

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A story about taking love off the page and into real-life…

Zoe Loyola is keeping a secret between her and her sketchbook. She loves sculptor Nick Gordon. Her drawings of him are hot…and naked!

Nick has a secret, too. He’s being blackmailed. Protecting his family means ignoring his desire for Zoe.

But in the world of art, passion breaks every rule and secrets are made for sharing.

Only .99!

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Links of Interest

Cosmo and Harlequin team up to create Red Hot Reads. The submission info is here.

E.L. James: PW's Publishing Person of the Year. For hilarious commentary on that, go watch this.

The Hobbit releases on Friday, yay! Interview: Richard Armitage Talks Thorin, Tolkien, and Being a Leader of Dwarves in THE HOBBIT Saga

From Tor.com: Historically Authentic Sexism in Fantasy. Let’s Unpack That.
The Mary Sue post.
And this excellent commentary from Foz Meadows.

Here Be Magic Group Announcements

Veronica Scott and a host of other authors are participating in the Mistletoe Madness Blog Hop December 14 through 21, with prizes at each stop and a Kindle Fire as the Grand Prize. Visit Veronica’s blog during the hop, comment to enter there and find links to all the other sites!

Jeffe Kennedy’s MASTER OF THE MASKS, an erotic update on the Phantom of the Opera set in Santa Fe, to Peter Senftleben at eKensington, for publication in 2013, by Pam van Hylckama Vlieg at Larsen/Pomada Literary Agents (World).

Saturday, December 8, 2012

When Future is Prologue

Posted by: PG Forte

I love world building as much as the next person, but I have to admit to a certain amount of trepidation when it comes to this week’s release of Finders Keepers. I can’t help but wonder what readers will think of the  not-so-distant future in which the book is set. It's a world that, in some ways, might feel a little too much like our own.

You see, in my future, there are no flying cars—at least not yet. In fact, the break-up of the United States (over by the time the book opens and referenced only in passing) has resulted in a world with less new technology, not more. The military has been fully privatized and now owns most of the more expensive  advances—like my bionic hero Caleb, who is the lucky recipient of expensive cell de-aging therapy that’s left him looking like a man half his age.

Of course the average person would still have access to some advances. My heroine, Sally, for example, uses a thermotropic dye for hair that changes color like a mood ring. But the majority of the population will be more like my second hero, Aldo, who drives a truck, lives in a 100-year-old ski cabin (that's it on the cover) and cooks his eggs in a cast iron skillet.

This world is partially built on my hypothesis that, forced to deal with smaller, local economies, consumers aren’t going to be able to support their current craze for the latest, greatest upgrades. Instead, I see them developing an increased nostalgic appreciation for things from the past. And that just fits this story of love lost and found so very perfectly.

Here’s a small excerpt:

Aldo puttered around the kitchen for a short while after the others left, but the ghosts of Christmas past were haunting him today, making him wish he’d never mentioned the damned decorations in the attic. The last time he’d used them had been several years ago when Davis had decided he was in the mood for a white Christmas. They’d come here then, and just like now, Aldo had handled the cooking while the others had dealt with the decorations. He should have thought about that when he’d suggested coming up here again this year, but they’d spent Christmas here so infrequently, he’d honestly thought it would be better. Right now, however, he was second-guessing a lot of his decisions. Maybe the fact that he and Sally had made fewer memories here gave those few an added luster, making them seem even more precious.

Finally giving in to the inevitable, he went up to the loft. If anyone was going to mess around up there with the boxes he and Davis had so painstakingly packed away, if anyone was going to screw with his memories of that particular afternoon, it was going to be him, damn it, and no one else.

The crawl space was just what its name implied; one had to be on one’s knees to access it. The whole time he was pulling boxes out, Aldo was remembering the afternoon he and Davis had put them in there. Most particularly he was remembering—vividly—how he’d spent most of that time ogling Davis’s ass and indulging in a harmless little fantasy of what it would be like if he and Davis were the married couple and Sally was simply their really close best friend. The three of them were already so at-home with each other, very little would have to change. If he and Davis were married, they would still be up here together packing boxes away while Sally was busy downstairs, vacuuming up pine needles. The only differences would be who got to go home together, which of them ended up sleeping alone, who would have to keep his hands to himself.

Read more about this story here: www.PGForte.com/FindersKeepersExcerpt.htm

Comment below and tell me about some of your favorite holiday memories. Or use the form below to enter this week’s contest.



Finders Keepers
Author:PG Forte
Length:Novel
ISBN:978-1-62300-089-9
Sometimes finding what you want is the easy part.

Caleb is a bionic soldier with little-to-no memory of his past. He's seeking the truth about himself and those missing memories.

Aldo's an undercover cop who just might have the answers to Caleb's questions. But if Caleb's the man Aldo thinks he is, how can he let him get away a second time?

Then there's Sally; she's an ER physician who used to be married to Aldo's late partner, Davis. Sally's not dealing with widowhood very well. In fact, it's getting harder, every day, just to find a reason to keep getting out of bed. If the truth about the men's shared past comes to light, she could lose them both. Along with her last, best reason to go on living.

This holiday season, chance will bring them together and give them an opportunity to help one another find what they each want most. But every gift comes with a price. And keeping what they've found once they've found it? Yeah, that's gonna be the hard part. 

Friday, December 7, 2012

By Hook or by Crook -- Writing Beginnings

Posted by: Nicole Luiken

Whenever I can’t decide what to read next from my towering To-Be-Read pile, I hold a first sentence contest.  I read the opening paragraph of each book and whichever one hooks me the most wins.  Sometimes I don’t even make it through the entire pile before getting caught by a skillful author.  A good opening can make me laugh, raise my eyebrows or shiver in anticipation.

Here are some of my favourites:
London, 5 October 1822. 
My Lord, You must Burn this Letter after reading it.  Should it fall into the Wrong Hands, I shall be once again Exiled to the COUNTRY, where I shall most certainly be placed in ISOLATION. 
Last Night’s Scandal by Loretta Chase.



If the other novice wizards on the row hadn’t broken into Raeshaldis’s rooms the previous day, pissed on her bed and written WHORE and THIEF on her walls, she probably would have been killed on the night of the full moon. 
Sisters of the Raven by Barbara Hambly.
I was never particularly keen on my job before I got shot and nearly lost it, along with my life. 
Odds Against by Dick Francis.
As a reader, I love hooks, but as a writer, they drive me crazy. 
Most of my novel receives 3-5 drafts, but those opening pages are so important and have to do so many things--hook the reader, show the setting, introduce the main character in a sympathetic way, set the tone and voice for the rest of the novel—that I often do 5-10 drafts of them.
My first draft opening for Gate to Kandrith is lost in the mists of time—I used to simply save overtop of the first draft when I did the next one—a practice that now makes me wince--but here is the second draft beginning:
On the morning of my exile I awoke with a vile taste in my mouth and a headache.
This opening has a few things going for it, mostly in that it raises questions.  Why is she going to be exiled and from where?  Why does she have a headache?
Unfortunately, during the revision process I realized I’d started the novel too early.  Most of the book deals with Sara’s ‘exile’ to Kandrith, but I needed some space to show the reader the corrupt and decadent Republic of Temboria and introduce some very important characters (like the villain!) so that they didn’t come out of nowhere in the ending chapters.
Sara still wakes this way with a vile headache, but the scene now takes place at the beginning of chapter three.
3rd draft:
Sara stared down at the peppered songbirds’ tongues curled on her plate with revulsion.  Tonight should have been a triumph for House Remillus, but she longed for the feast to be over.

She turned her head to the side, but the sick feeling in her stomach didn’t subside.  The banquet hall’s white dome pressed down on her as if she were an insect trapped under a bowl—with two thousand other ants.  The rise and fall of hundreds of conversations battered her ears with a sea of sound.  The thick, sweetish smell of burning incense sticks warred with the odor of sweat.  That and the stifling hot room combined to make Sara feel muzzy-headed.
In addition from switching from first person to third person POV, this new opening achieves some of my goals: it shows the decadent setting and hopefully provokes some sympathy for Sara.  Everyone has had the experience of being sick to their stomach and bird tongues to eat?  Blech.
I played endlessly with this opening, polishing the sentences, changing their order, etc. ad nauseum, (pity my poor writer’s group) but was still unhappy.  Eventually, I decided I needed a better hook.  I’d been trying so hard to establish my character and setting, that the first actual bit of action had drifted all the way down to page three!
7th draft:
Sara's stomach compressed into a hard knot as the tall, cadaverous high priest of Nir, the God of War, strode into the banquet hall. 
 
Seeking reassurance, Sara touched the crossbow she'd secretly had mounted to the underside of the head table.  The other high priests had come to confer a blessing on her father, the new Primus, but she doubted Nir's motives were so benign.

I didn’t delete the description of the hall and the bird tongues.  It’s still there in the first scene, it just comes a little later.
The introduction of Nir and the crossbow punches up the conflict nicely.  This is the version I submitted and was accepted, but my editor Stacy Boyd asked for one more tweak.
Final version: 
Almost time.

Sara’s stomach compressed into a hard knot as the tall, cadaverous high priest of Nir, the God of War, strode into the banquet hall.

Seeking reassurance, Sara touched the crossbow she’d secretly had mounted to the underside of the head table.  Hidden by the tablecloth, her fingers found the crossbow bolt she’d loaded, the cord she’d cranked back still taut, ready to fire as soon as she gave a hard pull on the lever.


If you’re a writer, do beginnings drive you crazy, too?  As a reader, what are some of your favourite first lines?

Thursday, December 6, 2012

The Magic In the Dance

Posted by: Marie Harte
It's all about the dance. There's magic in the choreographed steps to love. Or so I like to think.

I read a lot, and my primary interest is in romance. I write erotic romance, my favorite type of stories, actually, where love is expressed through physical means, and the relationship often progresses in those physical intimacies to deepen emotional ties.

Which leads me to the topic at hand...The magic in the dance. To tease or not to tease? 

I'm not a big fan of the wham bam, where at the middle of paragraph one on the first page, the couple is getting busy. I love watching a couple work toward a connection. There's just something about the dance a couple waltzes to get to that true love state that's all the fun.

I'm not saying a couple can't be intimate right away, or that it will ruin the story. But so often, that happily ever after comes without issue, and it's just not...fun. What obstacles did the couple face? How did they counter their challenges? It's like that idea that you can't experience highs without the lows. The love with the loss.

I love a story where the couple can't stand each other, then gradually fall in love. Or that couple that falls in immediate lust, acts on it, then has to barrel around a host of problems that come with it--and no, I'm not talking about secret pregnancies, but emotional troubles.
Some of my favorite plot points are:
  • Enemies to friends to lovers
  • Rivals in business
  • Younger sibling of the other's best friend
  • Friends forever, thus a hurdle to overcome into deepening the relationship
What are some of your favorite teases? Or a book where the tension is so great that you can't stop turning the pages? 

Merry Christmas and happy holidays. And if you haven't stopped by already, take a look at my blog for a contest that ends Dec 8th.  We've got some great prizes. And that's no tease.

Wednesday, December 5, 2012

The Magic of Kink

Posted by: Seleste deLaney/Julie Particka

WARNING: This post discusses both sex and kink. 

Don't read it if that sort of thing bothers you. Thanks!


I'm one of the contributing authors to Evernight Publishing's A Vanilla-Free Christmas anthology. Not all the stories are BDSM, but they are all kink of one variety or another. A strange choice for the holidays, you say? Maybe. But maybe not. The holiday season is all about magic whether from a religious or secular perspective. And kink is kind of magical too.

No, it's not for everyone, and I'd even say it's not magical for everyone, but for some people it is. The man who can't attain or maintain an erection normally suddenly discovers that when his woman wears stilettos that show off her pedicure, he doesn't need his little blue pill. The woman who has never had an orgasm until the day she agrees to let her guy tie her up. The stories go on and on. For a lot of people, kink isn't something that's just a fun part of their bedroom play, it's a requirement.

For me, that's one of the more fascinating aspects of kink. That it can often cure what doctors and modern medicine can't. Now, I'm not saying if you or your loved one have a problem you should go buy some rope and dive into shibari. Most people who are into kink have known long before they necessarily try it out. Those are the people who see a cop with handcuffs and the sight causes a sexual reaction (minor or major). The cop and what he or she represents feeds into roleplay kinks as well as Domination/submission. The handcuffs matter in a number of kinks, most notably bondage.

The funny thing about magic... as they say in Once Upon a Time and any number of books: "Magic comes with a price." In this case, there's the simple fact that kinksters are looked down upon by non-kink society (ie--the public). I won't bring up the-books-that-shall-not-be-named, but even their popularity isn't taking hard-core kink mainstream. Also? Kink can't save your marriage. It can, possibly (if both parties are into it), save your sex life, which is kind of the same thing sometimes. But the point is, kink isn't a cure-all.

But it does cure some things, and those things can have a powerful impact on people's lives. So when you find out that CEO of the fortune 500 company likes to have a woman tie him up and walk all over him (literally) in her five-inch heels, cut the guy some slack. That might be the only way he can let go of being in charge all the time. And alternatively, that woman? She's a soccer mom with a lot of bills and a dog that won't stop peeing in the house. Dominating that CEO is how she centers and remembers that she has control over something.

And when you find your significant other trying on your lingerie, let him. Or better yet buy him some of his own. Because everyone needs to feel pretty sometimes. And understanding is its own special kind of magic.


Vanilla-Free Christmas

This Christmas, the best gifts are waiting for those who have been naughty...

And the toys under the tree are not for children. Sexy Santas, naughty elves, and dominant shifters are ready to spread some very kinky Christmas cheer. It's a good thing the ladies in our stories are looking for anything but vanilla.

Be Warned: menage sex, anal sex, sex toys, BDSM, spanking

Tuesday, December 4, 2012

Do You Believe in Magic?

Posted by: Ruth A Casie

Don’t laugh. You’ll be surprised at the answer. According to recent research (Psychology Today), not only do people believe but our belief is hard-wired in our brain.

Our mind is made to look for patterns in order to identify connections between life experiences-basically putting together  cause and effect that leads to predictability. Simply stated, if we touch a hot stove and get burned, we associate the burn with the hot stove and, going forward, we avoid touching hot stoves. So identifying cause and effect is good for our survival. That said there are times when we mistakenly put things together.

Did you ever give someone ‘that look’ when they annoyed you or did you secretly curse them under your breath or in your head? You may hope these evil thoughts/curses have an effect but do you really think they do? They may not but sometimes we fool ourselves to think they do. A study by Emily Pronin (Princeton University) was designed to see if college-educated people could be tricked into believing they had such powers.

The students were broken in to two groups. One group met a new student (the victim) who was friendly. The other group met a new student that was rude and obnoxious. The study participants were given a voodoo doll which represented the victim and pins and instructed to pierce the doll’s head.” Minutes later the two victims reported having a headache. The participants who interacted with the rude student and had negative thoughts of the person thought they were instrumental in causing the victim’s pain. The control group had no such anxiety.

Bad magic isn’t the only king. There is just as much good magic. To see if magical thinking worked on wishes as well as curses, Pronin put together another study. Here the participants watched someone shoot hoops. At various times the participants were instructed to mentally cheer the shooter on or imagine them failing. The participants reported “feeling responsible” for the shooters success when they cheered on the shooter and the basket was made.

When the juxtaposition of our thoughts and what we see correlate, at least to us, it leads us to the conclusion that we had something to do with it. To the investigators, this proves “we are hard-wired to overestimate our control over external events.”

In addition to this intellectual explanation, there is another reason we believe in magic. Magic makes us feel like we have more control over our lives than we really do. Nobody likes feeling out of control. So to cope, we often develop superstitious thinking as a way to trick ourselves into thinking we have more control that we actually do. One such superstitious belief is "tempting fate" for fear of jinxing themselves. For example, people think it is more likely to rain if they wash their car.

Even for the non-believers they too experience that sensation that tempting fate increases the odds of a bad outcome. Paul Rozin conducted a study in which he had participants read a series of short stories and give their immediate response if the ending was a logical conclusion.

The story: Jon recently finished applying to graduate school and of all the schools he applied to, Stanford was his top choice. Typical of his mother's optimistic nature she sent him a Stanford T-shirt and when it came in the mail, Jon decided to wear it the next day.

The ending: A month later, Jon received a rejection letter from Stanford.

As expected, people who read that Jon wore the shirt his mother bought responded quickly that this was a logical end to the story. There was a control group. The story these participants read stated that when Jon received the shirt, he stuffed it in the bottom of his dresser drawer. These participants took longer to determine the story had a logical end. Rozin feels this result tells us that not only are we hard-wired to thinking in magical terms but that we do it quickly and automatically.

These basic instincts give us some indication why we enjoy stories filled with fantasy and magic. It also gives me a better understanding why magical elements in stories have to be logical, the cause and effect kind. It also explains why magical powers are so alluring. 

Last week the magical power I would have liked was being transported, like in “beam me up Scotty.” The commute since Hurricane Sandy here in lower Manhattan to New Jersey has been difficult. That said, what magical power would you like to have?

As a note, my story, Knight of Runes, which does deal with magic, is now available in paperback at Harlequin.com  

Monday, December 3, 2012

Here Be News

Posted by: Unknown


Our new releases this week


Sometimes finding what you want is the easy part.

Caleb is a bionic soldier with little-to-no memory of his past. He's seeking the truth about himself and those missing memories.

Aldo's an undercover cop who just might have the answers to Caleb's questions. But if Caleb's the man Aldo thinks he is, how can he let him get away a second time?

Then there's Sally; she's an ER physician who used to be married to Aldo's late partner, Davis. Sally's not dealing with widowhood very well. In fact, it's getting harder, every day, just to find a reason to keep getting out of bed. If the truth about the men's shared past comes to light, she could lose them both. Along with her last, best reason to go on living.

This holiday season, chance will bring them together and give them an opportunity to help one another find what they each want most. But every gift comes with a price. And keeping what they've found once they've found it? Yeah, that's gonna be the hard part.

Excerpt


ENTRANCED  A PowerUp! story
Jack Keiser hasn't had an easy time of it. After a disastrous mission for the government years ago, he's been wary of trusting his fellow agents. Or ex-agents, since they no longer work for the government but for him. Keeping the psychics in line is a full time job, made harder by his own strangely developing talent. Jack has the ability to change his shape. He's a chameleon who can assume the appearance of anyone he's ever touched. Even among psychics he's an oddball.

Now Jack's in a bind. Heather Stallbridge, sister to his silent partner in the gym, has gone missing, and it's up to Jack to find her. His journey leads him into the German Alps and to a strange village with even stranger people. To top off an already bad situation, the moment Jack sees Heather, he experiences what feels like love at first sight. Their connection is irrefutable, but he can' t trust that it's real. And that doubt is a problem, because without working together, they'll never find a way to escape the killers in the mountains, or to discover the unexplainable love growing between them.

Releases from Loose Id Dec 4th. 
Excerpt


Links of Interest

THE RANDOM HOUSE PUBLISHING GROUP ANNOUNCES NEW DIGITAL-ONLY IMPRINTS

The Hobbit and Goonies Movie trailer mash-up.

Elon Musk Wants to Build 80,000-Person Mars Colony

Here Be Magic Group Announcements

Carina Press has acquired Veronica Scott’s next Ancient Egyptian Paranormal Romance WARRIOR OF THE NILE, available September 2013…but if you can’t wait, you can read her PRIESTESS OF THE NILE available at Carina or Amazon NOW!

On Friday (Dec. 7) Literary Escapism's Black Friday event will host a (very) short story by Jax Garren which takes place between How Beauty Met the Beast (available now) and How Beauty Saved the Beast (releasing Feb. 11). Commenters will be entered into a drawing to win a copy of either book, winner's choice, at the end of the Black Friday event.  Stop by, say hello, read a free short and enter to win!

David Bridger announces that Golden Triangle will be released on February 11th 2013 from Carina Press:

GOLDEN TRIANGLE - Book 2 of WILD TIMES
Joe Walker was once a regular guy—until he discovered the truth about his past lives and magical abilities. He’s also been reunited with his immortal lover, Min, though they’ve been forced into hiding by Tyac, a werewolf who will stop at nothing to destroy them.
When their nemesis reappears, an old friend sends Joe back into the supernatural realm known as the Wild—and away from Min. He takes sanctuary at a lake that’s a gateway to an even more extraordinary world, where golden angels embark on dangerous quests for power.
But as Joe gets to know these mysterious beings, both he and the goldens are being hunted by enemies old and new. When a betrayal puts Joe in imminent danger, he and Min must find their way back together before dark forces tear them apart for good.
Read how it all began in QUARTER SQUARE, available now.

78,000 words


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